13th Oct 2019
Hugging a tree?
We're on Day 13 of the OctPoWriMo challenge. I'm afraid the prompt, "Hugging a Tree" didn't do anything for me today.
So, what to post instead? OK, here goes: I have tried a Loop poem today .
The Wood of the Tree.
Who, I wonder cut down the tree
from where it lived
lived in harmony with the others
until that day
day and night it was kept in some
place waiting
waiting for the time it was needed
its task to perform
perform it did the most perverse deed
of all time
time was getting near, they brought
out the man
man above all men, he did not speak
he took it
it was the cross that Jesus embraced
for us, with love
love brought him to his knees three
times in fell
fell in pain and sorrow with the weight
of our sins
sins that we now feel our own deep
sorrow for
for as surely as we are sinners we nailed
him to that tree.
Love how you tied it all to that dastardly deed!
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteA strong bit of verse.
ReplyDeleteGlad yoĆ¹ think so
DeleteThsnk you
Emotional set of lines :(
ReplyDeleteThank you Nima
DeleteInteresting, poetic, and spiritual response to the prompt. Made me think of the tree in Eden as well, far more innocent!
ReplyDeleteThank you Beth.
DeleteThe form I chose was a little difficult though
What a tree it was. Well written.
ReplyDeleteToo true.
DeleteThank you