28th Oct 2017
Good morning. There is certainly an autumnal chill in the air this morning, with chimneys puffing smoke heavenward.
I went to a writing for well being workshop yesterday. It's the first time in ages that I have written with other people and I found it immensely liberating . You writers who follow my blog if you don't already meet up with fellow pen smiths, then I would highly recommend that to do. The creative possibilities are increased tremendously. Now , on to catching up with octpowrimo. Here's three . I'll be back later to actually write today's. Enjoy...
Day 25
Taste of Satisfaction
To love what is mortal is no easy thing
Autumn turns green leaves golden then brown
From soft and stretchy to brittle and broken
All things change , make their unavoidable departure,
So, how to love that mortal thing,
And in the process keep possession of the I that is me,
Is it in the giving up or the giving in that the I is diminished,
Or is it otherwise -
Is it that the sacrifice makes the I into the strongest
Mountain, majestic , magnificent
And is there any sacrifice at all if all is joy when given
Yes, to love what is mortal is no easy thing
Day 26
Held
Eternal
only now, holding everything in being
you are to my I am
my soul held beneath your wings
held against your softness
held as present
held everlasting
Day 27
No Roses
Stepping into the old house into a cold wall of empty
climbing the rickety stairs slowly, each creak magnified
peeping round the bedroom door, daring to breathe -quietly
looking at her there in the bed as if asleep
smelling the strong scent of roses filling the room
smiling and thinking no flowers have been here.
Welcome to my blog. Grams is the name my first grandson gave me and it's stuck. My great loves: My husband, our nine children, twenty five grandchildren, four great grandchildren, my Faith, writing- prose and poetry - and travelling , especially in our camper. My posts are eclectic and I appreciate getting comments. So, please feel free to comment or offer advice on what you would like to to see more of.
Saturday, October 28, 2017
Taste of Satisfaction, Held, No Roses
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The phrase: cold wall of empty is palpable and I love the mystery of No Roses.
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Cold wall of empty - just beautiful.
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I agree. The cold wall of empty decribes this magnificently!
ReplyDeleteI loved your third poem.
I also like the idea of my soul being held as present, protected, everlasting.
In your 'Taste of Staisfaction" poem, I like the repetition, the poem coming full circle back to the beginning; I like how you ponder about the "I" in the process of loving.
Well done on all these poems. Thank you for stretching my thoughts.
XO
What lovely comments Dawn.
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Three excellent poems, each a wonderful little microcosm. Beautiful x
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