Sunday, April 23, 2017

Elevenie - Sun /Goldfish

23 rd April

The challenge for napowrimo today is to write an elevenie poem. Eleven words. Here's my double elevenie, which now makes twenty two words.



Sun / Goldfish

Sun
shining brightly
in clear sky
caressing earth and bones
warmly



Goldfish
circling around
lily pond chasing newts
swimming



1 comment :

  1. This was lovely, it brought to mind a warm Spring day with the sun shining and goldfish happily swimming, a place that would be lovely for a visit when out walking! Well done, my friend! <3

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