28th April 2021
Continuing with NaPoWriMo, which is nearly finished. I haven't made every day, but I've done a fair bit of the month.
Now there are only two days left. let's see if I can get to the end with two more poems to finish.
I have to attribute the first line of the poem to the poet
Simon Armitage. I thank him for the inspiration.
Once, the future was a beautiful place
Once,
the future was a place of beauty,
A place where, getting old together,
you and I would
Walk by the sea, kick up the stones,
laugh loudly,
While a gentle breeze breathes
through our hair.
Where, we softly stroll
among fresh,
fields of daffodils,
Yellow flowers, greeting
the spring,
perhaps you pick one,
tickle me under my chin,
do you still like butter?
as if you don't know.
A familiar, fresh, warmth
caresses our bodies.
you shut the curtains,
you offer me a glass of red,
you sit beside me.
We could share a poem together,
remember fondly, when
the children were young,
shed tears of gratitude
For each other, for all the blessings
For the life we’d had, together.
But now, that beautiful place,
that future
has been stolen away
ripped from my hands,
By your fading,
your weakening, day after day,
by memories of
sitting by your hospital bed,
Of holding your
hand, as,
so silently, you slipped away.
The future has become
an empty place - dark,
cold,
I’d rather not go there.
Big hug honey. This is so hard. ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandee, but I hope you realise, it's fiction
DeleteFiction or not, it is beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mimi
DeleteBeautiful poem looking to the future which is bleak in some places. Hugs to you.
ReplyDeleteThank you Margaret.
DeleteGreat to have you visit my blog
A beautiful poem. Let us appreciate and value the time we get to spend with our soul mate and love ones.
ReplyDeleteExactly Nancy . Yes, we have to love them while we have them and make the memories every day
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