My third response
The Circle
This winding road is actually a circle,
From where you've come to where you're going,
Coming back always to the same place,
Over and Over,
But changed.
And all the while another journey
Falling Into that deep universe,
Slowly, slowly,
Where nothing changes
Day 3:
The Circle
This winding road is actually a circle,
From where you've come to where you're going,
Coming back always to the same place,
Over and Over,
But changed.
And all the while another journey
Falling Into that deep universe,
Slowly, slowly,
Where nothing changes
Day 3:
3rd April 3rd poem.
Was inspired today by a walk along the coast . We took a path from the beach up a pretty winding staircase. Each turn gave a different, yet interesting view which made me reflect the path our lives take. Not sure I've done justice to it in this poem.
Go This Way
Go this way, by these winding steps,
Up this steep slope.
Stop here, rest,
Take in the view,
The castle - almost ruins
Wealth mostly spent.
Carry on up, round another bend,
See the lake- shrouded in mist,
Past joys hidden.
Struggle further, towards the summit,
Breathless,
The path narrows,
Turn, see the valley
Deep, dark,
Lost moments of gloom.
But now,
Crawl on to the summit,
Lift yourself up,
Stand, breathe deep
Look around,
All before you takes shape
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