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Sunday, April 23, 2017

Elevenie - Sun /Goldfish

23 rd April

The challenge for napowrimo today is to write an elevenie poem. Eleven words. Here's my double elevenie, which now makes twenty two words.

Sun / Goldfish

shining brightly
in clear sky
caressing earth and bones

circling around
lily pond chasing newts

1 comment :

  1. This was lovely, it brought to mind a warm Spring day with the sun shining and goldfish happily swimming, a place that would be lovely for a visit when out walking! Well done, my friend! <3


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