Here are some ramblings in response to Origens , by Imelda Maguire:
From Where Do I Come
I come from the edge of the city,
that suburban, semi-detached, quiet place on the hill,
from a father who was orphaned before he could speak,
who remembered the bomb shelters, the ration books.
From a father who was himself evacuated during the war.
I come from that "we worked hard to get here" place.
My father proud to have had an education,
proud to have become, "blue collar"
to have left the trowel behind.
I come from that stock of women
who made more of what they were given,
who rose from the soil of their ancestors.
From a mother who ran, ran barefoot
from want and hunger.
Who spent her life adding to her funds,
working hard for her money, saving her money,
afraid somehow, it might evaporate.
I come from that country of alone,
where all physical needs were cared for
but where, my heart was barren wasteland,
where the hope of my father hung round my neck
a noose strangling my own true longing.
But
I come from a family of fighters
Chains are loosened and the battle goes on
wow! I love this! you are quite the poet!!! zoe
ReplyDeleteThank you Zoe. You've given me quite a boost calling me a poet.
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Deep thoughts about family and how their shaping in turn shapes us.
ReplyDeleteThanks Messymimi.
DeleteI enjoyed reading your poem. You depicted your parents struggles vividly.
ReplyDeleteThanks Pat
DeleteSo pleased you liked it.
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That leaves one wanting more to the extent that it could be the start of an entire novel — or biography.
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DeleteNow there's a thought...
Well written, Marian. Hope you are well.
ReplyDeleteThanks Wayne . I'm fine. What about you?
DeleteI'm doing well, thank you. Good to hear from you. Keep writing. :)
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