9th June
Here is another six sentence story:
The word was "lift"
Mike was riding home late that evening, battling against the rain and wind, when he saw her standing by the side of the road, young, dressed in jeans and jumper but with no coat.
Putting his foot hard on the brakes the motorbike screeched to a sliding stop about fifty feet up the road, just avoiding going into the ditch, and walking back he saw her waiting there, long wet hair falling down her face, eyes on him, her hand raised expectantly and as he approached her he asked , "Can I give you a lift somewhere?"
"Yes please, home," she said, holding the hand he held out for her and giving him her name and address.
She sat behind him on the motorcycle as he drove off slowly but after a few minutes he was aware that her arms she was no longer wrapped around him so, fearfully, he turned back to search, thinking she must have fallen off.
Tired with trying to find her in the dark, he decided to drive to her home, which wasn't far away and at least inform her parents who would want to get the police involved.
He took a deep breath before knocking on the door and when a middle aged woman opened it he stumbled over his words saying, "Does a Diane Coulter live here ?"
The woman's face became a bit grey and as she asked him in she started , "She did once, but she died twelve years ago when a truck mowed her down on an evening just like this actually, just down the road there ...."
Welcome to my blog. Grams is the name my first grandson gave me and it's stuck. My great loves: My husband, our nine children, twenty five grandchildren, four great grandchildren, my Faith, writing- prose and poetry - and travelling , especially in our camper. My posts are eclectic and I appreciate getting comments. So, please feel free to comment or offer advice on what you would like to to see more of.
Friday, June 9, 2017
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Oooh, I wasn't expecting that ending when the story began! It gave me chills! :-) Who wouldn't stop to assist someone standing by the side of the road soaking wet from the rain? I suspect he is going to have a hard time forgetting about this experience and may avoid that road altogether from now on if possible! Great story, Maz, excellent take on the prompt!!
ReplyDeleteOooh chills!!!! Well done!!! Ivy
ReplyDeleteThis gave me the chills. Excellent story.
ReplyDeleteWell that's mighty chilling!
ReplyDeleteLove the surprise ending.
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