28th Feb 2019
Here's the photo prompt for Friday Fictioneers.
Photo : Jean L Hays
Robin
I hear you first - your familiar song
and my heart begins to soar
I raise my eyes - there you are
In the tree behind the store.
I stand for a while and watch you
A tear forming on my cheek
For a few brief moments I forget
That the weather is yet so bleak.
Then with joy I remember
That day three years ago
When finally she took her last breath
On that day too, there was snow.
In you flew to the garden
To the tree just outside the room
You gave us a last swansong
As her soul floated up to the moon
Welcome to my blog. Grams is the name my first grandson gave me and it's stuck. My great loves: My husband, our nine children, twenty five grandchildren, four great grandchildren, my Faith, writing- prose and poetry - and travelling , especially in our camper. My posts are eclectic and I appreciate getting comments. So, please feel free to comment or offer advice on what you would like to to see more of.
Thursday, February 28, 2019
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Dear Marian,
ReplyDeleteThere must be something good about the new inLinkz format. I had no trouble getting here. Lovely verses. Sweet and poignant story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Hi Rochelle, yes it seems to be working ok.
DeleteThank you for your lovely comment. Just over the 100 words, though but, ssshhh, don't tell ...
Maz, I only get cranky when the pieces go way over 100. like 30-100 or more. ;)
DeleteThis was beautiful, Marian.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dale. Glad you liked it.
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I didn't see that bird in the tree,
ReplyDeletebut I felt that last swansong.
Randy
Randy, it was an imaginary Robin. I just wanted to write this poem and took a bit of licence...
DeleteAwww! Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you
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ReplyDeleteBeautifully done.
Thank you Linda
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really pulls my heartstrings. very well crafted poetry
ReplyDeleteThank Jade
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Lovely sirens song for spring. Rebirth, renewal remember..
ReplyDeleteThank you Violet
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Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Shirley
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