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Tuesday, May 5, 2015

Tubs Of Ice Cream

My grandaughter got interested in writing poetry when I went to visit.
She posted this to me today:

Tubs Of Ice Cream

Tubs of ice cream
You can Buy:
Chocolate Chip
And many other tubs,
Ice creams are

I told her it was great. What do you think?

1 comment :

  1. A great attempt!

    Learning to write poetry is about learning to weld the weight of words. Reminds me of my first poem I wrote way back in Grade 3 when we were learning about killer whales. I can still recite the poem to this day.

    Perhaps not the most flawless piece of literature, but that poem set off a spark I've continued adding kindle to over the years. I hope she continues down this road, it really helped me.

    Oh and before I forget...I also really love ice cream :D


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